Once there was a guy named Dr inspector guy,
as you can tell by his name he likes inspecting things but he also likes making/building things,
so then one day he tried to make an unbreakable bubble so guess what he did he made the bubble.
He found it hard but as you know he still made the bubble. But one day he wanted to go in it to see
what it was like but he got stuck in the bubble then a breeze came and pushed him into the ocean.
He was having fun in the bubble for a little bit because he saw new animals and stuff plus he also
saw some awesome shipwrecks, He even found some treasure in one of them. He got really scared
because he had seen a shark “I mean if you saw a shark you would be scared as well alright back to
the story” the shark was hungry and he was mad but he saw a hook in him he wanted to help but without
getting hurt so he caught a fish and gave it to the shark to distract him. The bubble popped after
he saved the shark so it lifted up and he flew back to shore. THE END.
For the last couple of days, we have been trying to write a narrative and this is my narrative.
I liked how once I had an
idea it was easier/easy. I didn't like that it was really hard when I didn't have an idea.
as you can tell by his name he likes inspecting things but he also likes making/building things,
so then one day he tried to make an unbreakable bubble so guess what he did he made the bubble.
He found it hard but as you know he still made the bubble. But one day he wanted to go in it to see
what it was like but he got stuck in the bubble then a breeze came and pushed him into the ocean.
He was having fun in the bubble for a little bit because he saw new animals and stuff plus he also
saw some awesome shipwrecks, He even found some treasure in one of them. He got really scared
because he had seen a shark “I mean if you saw a shark you would be scared as well alright back to
the story” the shark was hungry and he was mad but he saw a hook in him he wanted to help but without
getting hurt so he caught a fish and gave it to the shark to distract him. The bubble popped after
he saved the shark so it lifted up and he flew back to shore. THE END.
For the last couple of days, we have been trying to write a narrative and this is my narrative.
I liked how once I had an
idea it was easier/easy. I didn't like that it was really hard when I didn't have an idea.
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